It's was a special chance that I could went to Australia. The family in Australia was my aunt's friends, and I just had a lunch and chatted at one time. It means that I was not familiar with them, but they are very kind and generous. I appreciated of them.
Sometimes I went to the day care center in the Sunnybank to be a volunteer as a helper, or I traveled by myself.
One day, I decided to go to a place that was very far away from where I lived - Stradbroke Isalnd. I would like to use my English ability and body to experience what I saw. It took me 4 hours to get there by taking a train, bus, water taxi and walking. I had to confess that my English was not good, but I was so happy when I got there. This picture was taken by me in the Frenchman beach. There was no one here but me. All I could see was the clean beach, blue sky and white sand. It was just like this place was my own heaven. I walked, listened to the sound of sea waves and gazed at the coastline between the blue sky and sea. I felt everything was suddenly peaceful in my mind.
I took this picture as my forgettable memory. I used the tripod and put the camera on the sand. I walked in front of the camera, so that's why I was in the picture.
Traveling makes me stronger because I acheived my goal without any help from others. I had no fear to be alone.
I love this photo!!!!! soooo beautiful! how can you take picture without anyone's help? I think you are in the picture!
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回覆刪除I like the way you decribe about the picture, it made me feel some kind of peaceful as well. It's glad to see you have a great and meaningful trip in Brisbane. Wish I could go there somdeday. :)
刪除Elvis, I wanna go to Australia too!!! hahaha. It seems the weather was so nice and you enjoyed the nature very well. That's an awesome experience! :D
回覆刪除The picture is so beautiful and I rally want to go there if I have enough money.I know the feeling to travel alone. It is very enjoyable and comfortable. You can find a lot of things different and talk to yourself alone.
回覆刪除It is really a good experience being a backpacker. I believe that you got the very different experience in Australia. Maybe we can go there together next time =)
回覆刪除Good :)
回覆刪除i admire your courage and the experience
回覆刪除it's really an awesome pic.
Elvis: http://elvishsu1215.blogspot.tw/2013/09/a-pictures-worth.html
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It was my first time to go abroad and stay so long time during the summer vocation [vacation]. I went to Brisbane in Australia for one and half month[s] and stayed at my aunt's friends.
[You can add a sentence here to introduce the following ideas- it will also serve as a transition from the previous sentence where you said you stayed there for a month]
Sometimes I went to the child care [day care center?] in the Sunnybank to be [voluneteer as a] a helper, or I traveled by myself.
One day, I decided to go to a plcae [place] that was very far away from where I lived - Stradbroke Isalnd. I would like to use my English ability and body to experience the what I saw. It took me 4 hours to get there by taking [a] train, bus, water taxi and walking. I had to confess that my English was not good, but I was so happy when I get [got] there. This picture was taken by me in the Frenchman beach. There was no one here but me. All I could saw [see] was the cleaning [clean- otherwise it would mean the beach was cleaning...] beach, blue sky and white sand. It [was] just liked [like] this place was my own heaven. I walked, listened [to] the sound of sea waves and gazed [at] the coastline between the blue sky and sea. I felt everything was suddenly peaceful in my mind.
I took this picture as my forgettable memory. That [what is 'that' you were referring to here?] make[s] me more stronger because I acheive[d] my goal without helping [any help from others]. I had no fear to be alone.
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perhaps you can explain how you took the picture by yourself as it seems like you were in the photo as well.
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